The Rise of Night

Where Two Worlds Collide: Percy Jackson/Kane Chronicles Crossover, written by two die hard fans. (NOT FINISIHED) *Will update ASAP*

So this Percy Jackson/Kane Chronicles crossover takes place a little after the Giant War with Gaea. It's our first time writing and we would really appreciate comments and stuff.
Also, bear in mind that

1.) The fact that Walt Stone and Rachael Stone have the same last name is a COINCIDENCE AND NOTHING ELSE.
2.) Isis's hair is supposed to be dark, I know, but just ignore that mistake.
3.) Calypso? What Calypo? I've never heard of her before, have you? :p
4.) So magicians are SUPPOSED to be able to use electronics and stuff. Whatever, things are different here so deal with it peoples.
5.) The first few chapters DO suck, I'm aware of that. But trust me, it gets better.
6.) DISCLAIMER: I OWN NOTHING BUT MY PITIFUL LITTLE CHARACTERS.................... (does Rick Riordan ACTUALLY check for disclaimers?)