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- Parts 196
- Time 6h 36m
Ongoing, First published Jun 07, 2019
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Table of contents
- UPDATESun, Apr 28, 2024
- IntroductionFri, Jun 7, 2019
- Oc Review Form (Requests Closed)Fri, Jun 7, 2019
- Review 1 // Rowan HuttonWed, Jun 12, 2019
- Review 2 // Clarietta YhenniMon, Jun 17, 2019
- Review 3 // Dread ShadowsMon, Jun 17, 2019
- Review 4 // Evan MorrisMon, Jun 24, 2019
- Review 5 // Rhomus DustbornSun, Jun 30, 2019
- Review 6 // Lillian HargreavesMon, Jul 1, 2019
- Review 7 // Vanessa Rajjah MarkrovWed, Jul 3, 2019
- Review 8 // Chokkan KarkanuThu, Jul 4, 2019
- Review 9 // Liling LongThu, Jul 4, 2019
- Review 10 // RayFri, Jul 5, 2019
- Review 11 // E08Sat, Jul 6, 2019
- Review 12 // Aphrodite Areia PalladinoSun, Jul 7, 2019
- Review 13 // Cameron AdamwaiteSun, Jul 7, 2019
- Review 14 // Kasai HikariMon, Jul 8, 2019
- Tip 1 // Characters With A Mental IllnessThu, Jul 11, 2019
- Review 15 // Gene Millen ZackaryThu, Jul 11, 2019
- Review 16 // RuthFri, Jul 12, 2019
- Review 17 // Rika MaedaFri, Jul 12, 2019
- Review 18 // Daisy MalfoyFri, Jul 12, 2019
- Review 19 // Michiko TakahashiSat, Jul 13, 2019
- Review 20 // MicahTue, Jul 16, 2019
- Review 21 // Kim TaehyunThu, Jul 18, 2019
- Review 22 // Aarav KumarFri, Jul 19, 2019
- Review 23 // Zerania Marie UmberSat, Jul 20, 2019
- Re-review 1 // Zerania Marie UmberSun, Jul 21, 2019
- Tip 2 // Marysues And Their CounterpartsSun, Jul 21, 2019
- Review 24 // Lucia JunoTue, Jul 23, 2019
- Review 25 // Narah Howler MiscereThu, Jul 25, 2019
- Review 26 // Arjun SinghFri, Jul 26, 2019
- Review 27 // Habuki FojiSat, Jul 27, 2019
- Review 28 // Vivaan SharmaTue, Jul 30, 2019
- Review 29 // Lilac Samantha MathewsThu, Aug 1, 2019
- Review 30 // Miki KaidaFri, Aug 2, 2019
- Review 31 // Keith Adrian MandelaSun, Aug 4, 2019
- Review 32 // Maki KurosawaSun, Aug 4, 2019
- Review 33 // Gaiishi HebiMon, Aug 5, 2019
- Re-review 2 // Narah Howler MiscereThu, Aug 8, 2019
- Review 34 // Yukio MishimaFri, Aug 9, 2019
- Review 35 // Jacklyn HanbyFri, Aug 9, 2019
- Review 36 // Hannah KelleyFri, Aug 9, 2019
- Review 37 // Beta AustreyaSun, Aug 11, 2019
- Review 38 // Leland VedrasTue, Aug 13, 2019
- Review 39 //Hibiki KidoTue, Aug 13, 2019
- Review 40 // Raina JohnsonThu, Aug 15, 2019
- Tip 3 // Dealing With Abuse In Writing And CharactersFri, Aug 16, 2019
- Review 41 // Rory GrumpSat, Aug 17, 2019
- Review 42 // SMILESun, Aug 18, 2019
- Review 43 // Royce LeyiraMon, Aug 19, 2019
- Review 44 // GreyTue, Aug 20, 2019
- Review 45 // Violent JayFri, Aug 23, 2019
- Review 46 // NeroFri, Aug 23, 2019
- Review 47 // Sungvia Marie ParielMon, Aug 26, 2019
- Review 48 // EvalyricTue, Aug 27, 2019
- Review 49 // Punainen Krējuma Seirs SakariTue, Aug 27, 2019
- Review 50 // Buttercup WoodsFri, Aug 30, 2019
- Re-review 3 // Evalyric VerityFri, Aug 30, 2019
- Review 51 // AnilahSun, Sep 1, 2019
- Review 52 // Mahlina Bellatrix CallistoSat, Sep 7, 2019
- Review 53 // KorahSat, Sep 7, 2019
- Review 54 // Crystalwater HavennsSun, Sep 8, 2019
- Review 55 // Lucen Reyza VestadaMon, Sep 9, 2019
- Review 56 // Azuline CaritusThu, Sep 12, 2019
- Tip 4 // Writing My Hero Academia OCsSun, Sep 15, 2019
- Tip 5 // Writing Relationships With Canon CharactersSun, Sep 15, 2019
- Review 57 // Celeste BrightTue, Sep 17, 2019
- Review 58 // Johanna NorvilleFri, Sep 20, 2019
- Re-review 4 // Celeste BrightSat, Sep 21, 2019
- Review 59 // MeganSun, Sep 22, 2019
- Review 60 // Mei HatoyamaSun, Sep 22, 2019
- Review 61 // Conner RoweSun, Sep 22, 2019
- Review 62 // Sachihiro TakayukiMon, Sep 23, 2019
- Review 63 // Thea HartonThu, Sep 26, 2019
- Review 64 // Savita JyotsnaFri, Oct 4, 2019
- Review 65 // SugoririFri, Oct 4, 2019
- Review 66 // Layla BaileySun, Oct 6, 2019
- Review 67 // Elizabeth FerreiraSun, Oct 6, 2019
- Review 68 // Georgia HopeTue, Oct 8, 2019
- Review 69 // Dixie BanditSun, Oct 13, 2019
- Review 70 // DarlingSun, Oct 13, 2019
- Review 71 // Empira AsagiSun, Oct 13, 2019
- Review 72 // Hana HarukiSun, Oct 13, 2019
- Review 73 // Midori AdachiSun, Oct 13, 2019
- Review 74 // Kevin SteelMon, Oct 14, 2019
- Review 75 // Malu NashimaMon, Oct 14, 2019
- Review 76 // Honoka MoriMon, Oct 14, 2019
- Review 77 // Madeline AinesMon, Oct 14, 2019
- Review 78 // Ravio KnewnFri, Oct 18, 2019
- Review 79 // Carmen TorresFri, Oct 18, 2019
- Review 80 // Natsuko UkiyoSun, Oct 20, 2019
- Review 81 // Adrian James WyattWed, Oct 23, 2019
- Review 82 // Pepper PatersonWed, Oct 23, 2019
- Tip 6 // Writing Creepypasta OcsThu, Oct 24, 2019
- Review 83 // Hartley SmaldersFri, Oct 25, 2019
- Review 84 // Camisha LaytiniFri, Oct 25, 2019
- Review 85 // Angie WilsonMon, Oct 28, 2019
- Review 86 // Ambra SerafinFri, Nov 1, 2019
- Review 87 // Altlas Abernette And Their AltersMon, Nov 4, 2019
- Review 88 // Circle PriceFri, Nov 8, 2019
- Review 89 // Adam BenedictSun, Nov 10, 2019
- Review 90 // Jamey SenburgMon, Nov 11, 2019
- Review 91 // StevenFri, Nov 22, 2019
- Review 92 // Ginkuru HikaruSun, Nov 24, 2019
- Review 93 // Kuna SawaMon, Nov 25, 2019
- Review 94 // Ayako ShibashimaMon, Nov 25, 2019
- Review 95 // Gata RodriguezMon, Nov 25, 2019
- Review 96 // AFri, Nov 29, 2019
- Review 97 // BFri, Nov 29, 2019
- Review 98 // Anita BarbosaFri, Nov 29, 2019
- Review 99 // Jeremias Joseff ClaudioFri, Nov 29, 2019
- Review 100 // Castiel AcrksFri, Nov 29, 2019
- Review 101 // Talia Lillian BennettFri, Nov 29, 2019
- Other OC Review BooksFri, Nov 29, 2019
- Review 102 // Dan BlackSat, Nov 30, 2019
- Review 103 // Shin SollicitusSat, Nov 30, 2019
- Review 104 // Macy RendersonFri, Dec 6, 2019
- 105 // Fuwatto NarikoFri, Dec 6, 2019
- Review 106 // RoseFri, Dec 6, 2019
- Review 107 // Fran BeckettFri, Dec 6, 2019
- Review 108 // Aria AdaraMon, Dec 9, 2019
- Review 109 // Nicolette CardwellSat, Dec 14, 2019
- Review 110 // Vick SpearsSat, Dec 14, 2019
- Review 111 // BeeSat, Dec 14, 2019
- Review 112 // BluSun, Dec 15, 2019
- Review 113 // Lucas SmithFri, Dec 20, 2019
- Review 114 // Braelynn ScottFri, Dec 20, 2019
- Review 115 // Luna AshFri, Dec 20, 2019
- Review 116 // Lenhard Jager LeifssonFri, Dec 27, 2019
- Review 117 // ScribbleSun, Dec 29, 2019
- Review 118 // Dylan DanielsSun, Dec 29, 2019
- Review 119 // Shion NakataSat, Jan 4, 2020
- Review 120 // Tyler ShafferSat, Jan 4, 2020
- Review 121 // ZhengSat, Jan 4, 2020
- Review 122 // Kayla NadiraSun, Jan 5, 2020
- Review 123 // Priscilla Lopes Bittencourt MillerTue, Jan 7, 2020
- Review 124 // Lucine Stone-LeeFri, Jan 10, 2020
- Review 125 // Kasai HagakuraFri, Jan 10, 2020
- Review 126// Ramelle TorroFri, Jan 10, 2020
- Review 127 // Sakiko IkkiWed, Jan 15, 2020
- Review 128 // Nicole BurnsFri, Jan 17, 2020
- Review 129 // Jacob GuilderSat, Jan 18, 2020
- Review 130 // Dimitri James JacksonFri, Jan 24, 2020
- Review 131 // Toby LewisSun, Jan 26, 2020
- Review 132 // Mikasa TakashiSun, Jan 26, 2020
- Review 133 // Belavahn Of Clan ArlananSun, Jan 26, 2020
- Review 134 // Alex EllenSun, Jan 26, 2020
- Review 135 // YeongSun, Jan 26, 2020
- Review 136 // KarikSun, Jan 26, 2020
- Review 137 // Miyuki RenSun, Jan 26, 2020
- Review 138 // Jericho William CoutheranFri, Jan 31, 2020
- Review 139 // Chamomile FredrickFri, Jan 31, 2020
- Review 140 // Kairion PaximaFri, Jan 31, 2020
- Re-review 5 // Liling LongFri, Jan 31, 2020
- Review 141 // Vera Hisarha Ausch HaswitchFri, Jan 31, 2020
- Review 142 // NykoSat, Feb 8, 2020
- Review 143 // Lanna Origam And SoroSat, Feb 8, 2020
- Review 144 // Anna Morgan GraceSat, Feb 8, 2020
- Important!!! Let's Talk About Writing TipsSun, Feb 9, 2020
- Re-review 6 // Chamomile OpheliaSat, Feb 15, 2020
- Review 145 // Ivy ElleSun, Feb 16, 2020
- Review 146 // Alora SovannaSun, Feb 16, 2020
- Review 147 // Leo Killian SunshineMon, Feb 17, 2020
- Review 148 // FrancisTue, Feb 18, 2020
- Review 149 // Levi AoisaiWed, Feb 19, 2020
- Review 150 // Astrid TempleFri, Feb 21, 2020
- Review 151 // KalibriaSun, Feb 23, 2020
- Review 152 // Steve DonaldsonSun, Feb 23, 2020
- Re-review 7 // Luna AkiraSun, Feb 23, 2020
- Review 153 // Nimoy KiMon, Feb 24, 2020
- Review 154 // JophielMon, Feb 24, 2020
- Review 155 // JiaSat, Feb 29, 2020
- Review 156 // Van SpieelSun, Mar 1, 2020
- Review 157 // DerufiniSat, Mar 7, 2020
- Review 158 // Angela Eva MorningstarSat, Mar 14, 2020
- Review 159 // Kainalu OponuiSat, Mar 14, 2020
- Review 160 // Alexandra CahillSun, Mar 15, 2020
- Another AnnouncementSun, Mar 15, 2020
- Review 161 // Gilbert WagnerFri, Mar 20, 2020
- Review 162 // Briar-RoseFri, Mar 20, 2020
- Review 163 // Valencia KingThu, Mar 26, 2020
- Review 164 // Rebecca VerhoevenFri, Mar 27, 2020
- Review 165 // Fujimoto DaichiMon, Mar 30, 2020
- Review 166 // Summer ReiMon, Mar 30, 2020
- Review 167 // Akira NagomiMon, Apr 6, 2020
- Review 168 // FourMon, Apr 6, 2020
- Review 169 // Alexandria BlackthorneTue, Apr 7, 2020
- Review 170 // Diba KasaliThu, Apr 16, 2020
- Review 171 // Catalina MiracleThu, Apr 16, 2020
- Review 172 // Shyra ArubinoThu, Apr 16, 2020
- Review 173 // Ophelia GirouxFri, Apr 17, 2020
- Review 174 // AmeliaSat, Apr 25, 2020
- Review 175 // MOTOMERUSun, May 3, 2020
- Review 176 // Rin LeeFri, May 8, 2020
- The EndThu, May 28, 2020
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