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Allegiant Alternate Ending

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Reads 320,167
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Parts 76
Time 5h 14m

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allegiant divergent fanfiction fourtris insurgent

***WARNING SPOILER ALERT*** Hey guys! So the title basically says it all, I disagreed with the ending of allegiant and although I love Veronica's writing I wanted tris to live(: I promise the story will be better than the description(:All Rights Reserved

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Allegiant - alternate ending by oneearth

The Allegiant ending was not so bad but it made me empty. There were two reasons why I did not like it. Firstly the sacrifice as it is now seems useless to me. For Caleb it was more another grief than help (not thinking about Four...). And the second is the fact that they still didn't solve anything. There was no use of her divergence, if this did not help the word to become better, to find a solution for all these people from the fringe ... I really don't think that her mother would be happy is the story would ended like this. All characters all belong to Veronica Roth, but I changed/added some parts! At the beginning I did only minor changes in existing chapters, but then everything is new. THIS STORY CONTAINS ALLEGIANT SPOILERS! Thank you so much for the reads, votes, and comments!!! I am sorry for grammatical and other mistakes in the text - I am not a native (English) speaker.

Alternate ending of allegiant by book_fanattac

This is my alternate ending to allegiant so hope to enjoy :)

Candor Or Dauntless-No War (Editing) by _fourtris_fourever

FOURTRIS!!are in a relationship in this version of the story All characters belong to Veronica Roth (Who I am going to kill after reading Allegaint for the 50th time and crying I wrote this story because I feel Tris and Four didn't deserve the life they got at the end of Divergent.They should have been allowed to be teenagers,to love,to have a family.Not to go to war and have **** die.They deserved so much more than what they got.This will shift away from Candor or Dauntless but a game will show up every now and then.Will is still alive but Al is dead. *MAJOR FEELS* *Mature content like heavy swearing*

What if... by _theDivergent

***ALLEGIANT SPOILERS*** One choice can make him forget. One choice makes her come back Tobias Eaton is longing for Tris to come back. Never did he believe she actually would. Let alone bring their daughter with her. Tris has been tested on for three years and is still in danger when the wrong people get a hold of her daughter. Throughout the span of two years there's additions to the Eaton family, and many altercations with the past. However in this story everyone (except Al) is still alive. So its just one big happy family, but this family is far from normal. All rights to the characters go to the brilliant Veronica Roth

What Happened? by thelastprior

What happens when Tris loses her memory of the past 6 years? She forgot she's married to Tobias, that right now, she is pregnant with a baby girl. What will happen? All characters are owned and created by Veronica Roth I hope you like it =)

Together, Finally by Stanski55

This is a story if Tris had had a normal initiation and her and Tobias were able to have a normal life... It is a story about 3-4 years after Tris was initiated and her and Tobias's life after, what will happen? This has some mature content so beware... Thanks for reading please vote and comment I don't own Divergent and the characters Veronica Roth does... not me

Transcendent by Sharon_Carter

We all know what happens at the end of Allegiant,right. Well what would have happened if Tris didn't die but was saved by a secret government organisation. Under a new name and a new appearance, Tris must travel back to Chicago if she is to stop a reckless serial killer. But when she finds out Tobias has moved on, and with someone she would have never expected, everything comes crashing down. But will she stay in order to protect the ones she loves and herself? This is an alternative ending to Allegiant. I own none of the original characters as the amazing Veronica Roth does. But some are a figment of my imagination. Please comment, like and follow! *Just to be clear, I've had a lot of comments confused about this but Will, Uriah, Lynn and Marlene are all still alive as well.

Allegiant Alternate Ending by Suniedaze

Like so many others, I was not happy with the way Allegiant ended. I thought Veronica Roth did a beautiful job of writing Tobias's perspective after Tris's death, but I felt like her death was meaningless because it could have been avoided. Having her die because she forgot her gun in the hallway was an insult to her character. Tris was way too smart for that. I needed their happy ending as well as one that did the characters justice. (I don't own any of the characters or the story. All the credit goes to Veronica Roth )

Tris Is Alive by DauntlessWarrior4

What if Tris didn't die in Allegiant but everyone else thinks she's dead. What will she do now that she has survived? Will she ever find her way back to Tobias? First I would like to say that I have no rights over the Divergent Series, it obviously belongs to the amazing Veronica Roth. I hope you all enjoy it, feedback and comments are very helpful! AMAZING COVER MADE BY @RayPrior *FINISHED*

Determined by shellmom

this is what I think would have happened if tris would have lived. I hope you like it. I've read alot of stories but I want to try my own. Any feedback is wanted. ENJOY! I do not own all rights belong to Veronica Roth. warning Allegiant spoilers. fan fiction

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Candor Or Dauntless-No War (Editing) cover

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Transcendent cover

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Tris Is Alive cover

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Allegiant - alternate ending

The Allegiant ending was not so bad but it made me empty. There were two reasons why I did not like it. Firstly the sacrifice as it is now seems useless to me. For Caleb it was more another grief than help (not thinking about Four...). And the second is the fact that they still didn't solve anything. There was no use of her divergence, if this did not help the word to become better, to find a solution for all these people from the fringe ... I really don't think that her mother would be happy is the story would ended like this. All characters all belong to Veronica Roth, but I changed/added some parts! At the beginning I did only minor changes in existing chapters, but then everything is new. THIS STORY CONTAINS ALLEGIANT SPOILERS! Thank you so much for the reads, votes, and comments!!! I am sorry for grammatical and other mistakes in the text - I am not a native (English) speaker.