Jim Cormine
HorrorBabe666
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HorrorBabe666
Ongoing, First published Jun 09, 2019
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This is a thriller/horror story. It delves the reader into the messed up mentality of a certain man in the small village of Maysville. Every month a new victim goes missing and it follows the torture and the wanting to escape from the perspective of the main character called Camila. In a way, he loves them to death.

I'm all for critiques, I want to get better at my writing and I want feedback on how I can improve and make it more interesting, so please enjoy, will be going back to edit quite a bit. Enjoy :)
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