It Hunts Through Shadows

Something stalks you, sending claws of fear raking down your spine. You know it's silly, it's just your overactive imagination. But that noise. That wasn't natural. Was it?

A short thriller that I wrote for my creative writing class. The assignment required we write the story based off the image that is the cover. Please let me know how you think I did. All POSITIVE feedback is always welcome and encouraged.