Blood On The Oak

Blood On The Oak

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Just weeks ago, Lydia, Spencer, and Liam would travel through these woods together. But the death of Spencer, and Liam in his comatose state cause Lydia's experience here to drastically change. Lydia ventures into the woods where we discover exactly what happened on that fateful night through flashbacks and memories that will haunt her forever. Even after what happened, Lydia discovers that there is more to these woods than she and her friends had known for several years. This is my first post on Wattpad or anything similar to it. I did not write this as a short story. In fact, this is the fourth chapter in a book that I am currently working on. I am sitting at 9,600 words or so, and I thought it would be a good idea to get any input I can on my writing as I move forward. I understand that it doesn't seem smart to post the fourth chapter instead of the first, but I found that this part of the story best represents the idea of the book better than the previous three chapters, if I were to post only one. There are a lot of parts in this story that are not shown, and I would be amazed if anyone was able to guess the general plot, but I am posting this to simply get feedback, if possible. Criticism/advice is much appreciated.
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Why him?

(Sequel to "Why me?") I still have nightmares. It's been years, I've tried to move on yet they still haunt me. No matter what I do nothing can fix it. I still don't understand why anyone would treat an innocent soul as foul as they did mine. I sit awake at night wondering, what did I ever do to deserve such a thing? It may seem that I'm happy and that I'm a strong independent alpha now but little does everyone know I'm still broken, just as broken as when I watched my "parents" die right before my eyes. Even though all these thoughts rush through my head constantly there's always one question that I can never seem to shake. Why him? ••• Sequel to 'Why me?' I would recommend reading the first book before this. Warning: foul language and sexual content

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