Blood On The Oak

Blood On The Oak

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WpMetadataNoticeSon yayınlanan Sal, Haz 11, 2019
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Just weeks ago, Lydia, Spencer, and Liam would travel through these woods together. But the death of Spencer, and Liam in his comatose state cause Lydia's experience here to drastically change. Lydia ventures into the woods where we discover exactly what happened on that fateful night through flashbacks and memories that will haunt her forever. Even after what happened, Lydia discovers that there is more to these woods than she and her friends had known for several years. This is my first post on Wattpad or anything similar to it. I did not write this as a short story. In fact, this is the fourth chapter in a book that I am currently working on. I am sitting at 9,600 words or so, and I thought it would be a good idea to get any input I can on my writing as I move forward. I understand that it doesn't seem smart to post the fourth chapter instead of the first, but I found that this part of the story best represents the idea of the book better than the previous three chapters, if I were to post only one. There are a lot of parts in this story that are not shown, and I would be amazed if anyone was able to guess the general plot, but I am posting this to simply get feedback, if possible. Criticism/advice is much appreciated.
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Just when I thought things couldn't get worse, it did...All I remember is running from something in the woods. Everything went black. I suddenly woke up in a bedroom that clearly isn't mine. I can't remember anything else. Name, family, where I live...nothing. then appears 5 boys. Handsome but terrifying. Memories fill me up and leave me with a terrible head ache. They wont let me leave.Wait...was I kidnapped? No. That doesnt sound right . They have secrets and I want to find out about what. I eventually got to know them better. They helped me through my darkest times. I think I could live with this. Somehow. Until they revealed a secret to me that left me devastated. King and Queen of wolves? Sounds awesome right? Nope. The subject lingered in my head for countless days.But lets skip that for now. I think I'm falling for them. But which one do I choose? ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- #131 in success #350 in woods #69 in bad-language #83 in bloodsucker #11 in lilsmut

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