Fatal Flaw
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Everything about them was stark different. He was the small town boy- she was the big town girl. He was the optimist-she was not. He saved lives-she wanted to embrace death as soon as possible. He was strong under pressure-she crumbled under it. He was the happy go lucky guy-she was the overthinking and sensitive girl. Basically they were not meant for each other, right?
Wrong. They had a million differences but one major similarity, their fatal flaw. Their love for others was their achilles heel. They had seperate lives and it was fine until then but what happens when these star crossed people meet and fall in love? What happens when they become each others weakness? While he does everything to save their love she thinks it best to let go.
Whose fatal flaw is stronger?
Is it the guy, will he hold on until she gives in ....
Is it the girl, will she make sure they part ways for good....
Will they be able to turn their weakness into their biggest strength?
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