Critical Zero Reviews

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Reads 325
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Hey, I'm Zero and I do Reviews...so send me your scripts, your screenplay, your fan fic or Original Stories and I'll do my own personal review for it. 

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"I'm Fine" TordTom//TomTord by SmolAlexBean

Completed ((I dunno what to put here :>)) ~Tom~ -Short like 5'1 short -Feminine body -he be a thicc smol boi ÙwÚ👌 -he is anorexic -has REALLY bad anxiety and takes pills for it -has depression -suffers from suicidal thoughts -is crushing on Tord -likes to cut and do other self harm things -is usually smiling when around others ~Tord~ -second tallest -I dunno what else to put -~- -basically like his normal self -he has a crush on Tom ~Matt~ -Tallest bean -not as stupid -still likes looking at himself in mirrors , ~Edd~ -second shortest at 5'7 -still like to draw -still loves cola -it's Edd alright? Nothing changed ~plot~ Tom is usually a nice bean and is always smiling no matter what, you could be punching his face in and he'll still be smiling, but the others noticed that he was getting thinner and hiding in his room more often than usual. Tom goes about a week without leaving his room and Edd and Matt send tord in to check on him, when he finally gets the door open he finds Tom hiding under his blankets..... What happens next? Idk you have to read the book to find out ((btw this is a TordTom book and might (idk) have smut)) ★WARNING THIS BOOK CONTAINS CUTTING, AND MUCH MORE THAT COULD TRIGGER PEOPLE, IF YOU GET TRIGGERED EASILY PLEASE DO NOT READ! thank you :>★ Sub: Tom Dom: Tord If I decide to write smut :> ♥slow updates♥

[Solo Leveling//Sung Jinwoo x Reader] by xKuroha

A/N as of October 23, 2025: I'm currently in the middle of the semester, I will be back by the third week of December! (I forgot to update the note last august oops...) !!!DISCLAIMER, READ FIRST!!! I'm sure that some of you may be experts and have your own personal preferences and opinions, but remember that I am mostly writing this for myself. "Y/n" is also used in this story which I'm pretty sure is hated and a lot of readers are put off by it, so I suggest just not reading this if you already feel some sort of negativity. This is purely a self-indulgent fic, the Y/n character isn't meant to portray anyone and is just a mere fantasy. I try to portray the canon characters close to the original but I may miss the target completely. I have no experience in writing and English isn't my first language. "If you have nothing nice to say then it's better to not say anything at all." Status: ONGOING, Not proof read Posted: July 17, 2022

Book Reviews [COMPLETED] by bluecrayonlady

THIS BOOK IS NOW COMPLETED. PLEASE DO NOT COMMENT YOUR REQUESTS HERE, BECAUSE I WILL NOT RESPOND. IF YOU WANT A BOOK REVIEW, REQUEST IN BOOK REVIEWS 2. IF YOUR REQUEST HAS NOT BEEN RESPONDED TO, PLEASE REQUEST IN BOOK REVIEW 2 ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Submit a form to get your book reviewed! Please remember that these reviews are just my opinion and you shouldn't feel insulted or let down. These reviews are just suggestions. Whether you want to use them or not, it's your choice. Just remember to always keep writing and don't let these reviews stop you from writing! There is NO PAYMENT!!! UNLESS... YOUR BOOK HAS MORE THAN 20 CHAPTERS. THEN THERE WILL BE A PAYMENT (choose one) - read one of my books - design art for one of my books (I will post it in the book too!) - give me a shout-out or promote this (Book Reviews) book If you have another idea for payment, you can DM me :D Thanks so much guys! EDIT: YOU HAVE 2 DAYS TO COMPLETE PAYMENT AFTER I GIVE YOU A REVIEW! NOTE: I DO NOT READ ANIME OR HORROR STORIES, sorry :/ I will read fanfiction, but I will determine whether I know that fandom or not. Check out the first chapter for the form! - bluecrayonlady

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My Fair Thomas... | TordTom [] WTFuture [] by MrGrayNyx

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"I'm Fine" TordTom//TomTord

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