Despair (Working Title)
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Last published Fri, Jan 10, 2020
This is a very rough draft of the beginning of my fiction story.
Luis is a paranormal researcher who teams up with new friends to stake out a recently abandoned house that a woman died in. Follow this story to tiptoe through the parallels of the unknown.
The dialogue is pretty strong but I still have to fill in a lot of narrative. Thanks for all of your patience.
Constructive feedback is appreciated.
(Any edits in early parts are minor for now. When I get to the editing stage and start working hard on it I'll let you know)
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