The Centaur Story
- GELESEN 89
- Stimmen 2
- Teile 2
This is the first chapter of a book I'm writing. It's about a centaur who is kidnapped and is trying to return home. The style is something of a mix of C. S. Lewis and J. R. R. Tolkien. Please give lots of feedback! Is it confusing? Boring? I'd love to hear any suggestions you may have!
Alle Rechte vorbehalten
Werde Teil der größten Geschichtenerzähler-CommunityErhalte personalisierte Geschichtenempfehlungen, speichere deine Favoriten in deiner Bibliothek und kommentiere und stimme ab, um deine Community zu vergrößern.
Vielleicht gefällt dir auch
The Cursed Legacy
I don't really know how to feel about it, but I thought for a long time about whether to publish it. It's first draft, without major modifications. i forgot some of the names, so i will fix it later haha. I accept all feedback. (please tell me whats wrong;3) English is not my native language, so I hope there are no terrible mistakes.
Do We Live Or Do We Die (Owen Grady X Zach Mitchell)
The one day things look like they are going well for Owen things go to shit. Pretty much the same events of Jurassic world just with some alterations to the story. Like there are Alpha, Beta, Omega dynamics. And sorry if the story is kinda bad this is my first story I postedAbgeschlossene Geschichte
Welcome to My World A.K.A Jurassic World
UPDATE: This work is getting revised currently (6/21/22) so expect updates Getting a job is never as simple as it sounds. For Hailey getting her first job was easy, it was what it lead to Starting out as a summer intern before returning to college, the official Assistant to the Park Supervisor. Sounds exciting and official right? Right? But even a job as mediocre as this one could set her on a life-altering path fit with hot handlers, death, and dinosaurs. So I've seen Jurassic World twice now and I plan to see it 4000000 more times because Chris Pratt. I don't own any Jurassic World/Park. I just own my characters and yes this is an Owen Grady story. So you're welcome.Abgeschlossene Geschichte
Blood Angel
Paige has survive on Isla Matanceros for almost two years now. What happens when things start to go right? Or is this all just an illusion hidden by a dream? *Everything happens before Owen and Claire arrive on the island. *this will become mature I do not own the characters (besides my OC), they all belong Universal. The story however belongs to me.Abgeschlossene Geschichte
The Wolf With A Fox
This is my first story so please give me as much feedback as possible. I hope you enjoy
The King's Heart (Thranduil Fanfiction)
Being a king is hard. Raising a son is hard. Living with eternal grief is hard. King Thranduil is just trying to keep his kingdom running and his son safe when an elf is found with orcs at the border of Greenwood. Who could this mysterious elf truly be? But then the elf he rescued in the forest grows closer to Legolas, and Thranduil can not help but enjoy her company as well. Darkness descends over the forest, all because of this one elf. When lives are threatened, Thranduil must make a choice: his kingdom or his heart. 12/14/21- y'all I wrote this in high school and I kinda want to go through it again and do a bunch of editing. Some of my writing makes me cringe and what are we here for if not improvement. That being said, this story will change starting today probably and if you're in the middle of it, hopefully I don't confuse details or timelines for you. If you've already read it once and just felt like you had to read it again, maybe it will provide some new enjoyment. Who knows? Maybe I'll actually finish some other stuff I have on here.Abgeschlossene Geschichte
Unstoppable Beast
I want to make a story about a dinosaur and I wanna know if some people will like how I plan to make this story or not so here we go. but first warning the dinosaur is pretty aggressive. and with that please do enjoy this story.
Knightshade Forgotten.
A Original work inspired by my adventures with the friends that I'd be proud to call family. This is a medieval fantasy work coming from my own brain. Let me know if you have feedback or suggestions! We follow the life of a noble who was taken from his home due to his unknown heritage and ability to take the form of a beast. He escapes from his captors and takes in a lost little girl who could be the key to the life he wants. However, as he is pursued by the Wyngerians, an army that thirsts for power and glory, he hopes to not be dragged into any wars for the benefit of his allies and foes.Abgeschlossene Geschichte
A dino friend (Jurassic Park Fanfic)
||Book 1|| Jane Grant, 7 years old niece of Alan Grant, is invited to Jurassic Park at Isla Nublar along with her uncle and Ellie Sattler. But that time she didn't know what she got herself into. While being at the island, Jane meet new people as well as living dinosaurs, one of them being her favourite specie when the power went out in whole park and dinosaurs are free to escape. What surprised Jane is the way Tyrannosaurus Rex named Rexy acted around her. Instead of harming her or worse, eating her, Rexy seems to like Jane's presence. But why? Started [12.3./23] Finished [3.5./23] AIN'T A LOVE STORY I do not own the film nor characters, mine is only my oc. Hope you like it and get ready for book two after finishing this one. <3Abgeschlossene Geschichte
Ash: The Wolves of the World's End
Ash has never seen his parents after the Great Fire. Left and forgotten in the embers, he was reluctantly adopted in a rival pack. But when him and Selena, a beautiful white wolf, are ostracized to the mainland, Ash discovers a world of magic, danger, and a dark family secret. His father is still alive, and is waiting for him at the World's End, the icy channel that separates the New World wolves from their ancestral homeland. If Ash wants to see his father again, he will have to lead his ragtag pack on a wild journey, before his father disappears off the face of the earth... forever. ***Note, thus is an unfinished first draft. Any comments, whether compliments or critiques, would be appreciated. Thanks, and enjoy.*** Edit: As of June 2019, I remembered that I had a Wattpad account from my high school years. If you're still waiting for an update on this story, I'm sorry, but this story is dead.Abgeschlossene Geschichte
I don't really know how to feel about it, but I thought for a long time about whether to publish it. It's first draft, without major modifications. i forgot some of the names, so i will fix it later haha. I accept all feedback. (please tell me whats wrong;3) English is not my native language, so I hope there are no terrible mistakes.
Mehr DetailsInhaltsrichtlinien