Let me be free
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Last published Mon, Jun 24, 2019
Another poem of depression and sorrow. The teenage world is the worst shit there is. We just want to have a sense of freedom to be who we want to be and not live to anyone's standards. Causing us to rebel or do stupid shit. Don't blame us for the depression and suicide rates with out looking to see if you're part of the problem.
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