The Sun's Rising

An adventure where two princesses are stolen from their realm, and their mother, the Queen, dies from a broken heart. In the human world, nobody knows who, or what, they are, the only two girls that can raise the Sun and Moon in the Other Realm. This has set the Other Realm in eternal darkness, making it difficult for beings living there to survive. Two princes from the Sun and Moon sides of the realm come to seek for the lost princesses. What they didn't search for though, was the beautiful young women who quickly enrapture their hearts. And where in the human realm exists no magic, in the Other Kingdom all creatures thrive, werewolves, unicorns, faeries, elves, giants, everything. Will the princesses leave their whole life behind to become the true queens of the Other Realm? Or will the realm slowly parish and everything with it?

***This story is no where near completion, but I would like to know, if enough people enjoy what I have, if I should continue or not.