Horror shorts

It's my first story so if there is anything that you think needs improvement please tell me. I do not accept deconstructive criticism!

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Emily and her family are waiting at the public bus stop so they may go to the store.
But when something unexpected shows up they wonder if it is the best choice, it was already to late as soon as they got to the first step on the bus. Find out what will happen to them in the short story 'Deadly Bus Ride.