Her Burning Feelings
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Last published Mon, Jul 14, 2014
Why?...
Why don't you see me?
I am here.
Don't ignore me!
Help...
Help...
Hell...
Die.
Ayano Kazumi, a totally normal highschool girl has too many feelings she cannot express out to her friends. She is afraid of people leaving her because she will become lonely then forgotten. But what is worse than that is the feeling of being ignored by the people whom she used to feel soo comfortable with. She feels like just as though the world is just against her. Maybe it is...
You'll find out who will turn out to be her true friend in the end because there is such thing as a 'true friend' once she realises her mistake. Betrayers, Gossipers, Ignorers and Judgers are the reason why a normal teenager's life is a living hell.
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