Accepting Fate (Unfinished Test Novel)
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Ongoing, First published Jun 27, 2019
I am calling this a test novel because I intend to possibly publish this to the world, but I didn't finish it, and want y'all opinion on what I've written so far. I started this book in April of 2018 and stopped in July 2018. I got writers block, and since then I've been reluctant to finish the story. I feel that it may be too cheesy and a little of a "try hard" novel. 
     Accepting Fate is about a group of friends who become trapped in the upstairs bathroom of one of their houses after one of their step dads tried to murder all of them, and they're trapped in there for most of the story. Please give me some feedback on whether or not I should continue, or scrap the whole idea and start new.
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