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Escaping from My Sister in Law's Obsession by Chamieqt

Si Elara Meridian Galen ay 17 years old na isang law student sa Harbinger University. Galing sa mayaman na pamilya ngunit hindi pa rin siya masaya dahil pakiramdam niya ay wala siyang kalayaan. Si Ethan Orion Galen ay ang panganay na kapatid ni Elara na 26 years old. Isa itong abogado at namamahala ng kanilang family business. Si Lysandra Aether Harbinger naman ay isang abogado at politician sa edad na 28 years old. Isa siyang Governor at ang soon to be fiancé ni Ethan. Anong mangyayari kung ang sister-in-law ni Elara ay obsessed sa kanya habang engaged sa kanyang kuya?!? TAGLISH

Macky's Fantasy by skrttt01

Kwentong puno ng kasabik-sabik at maiinit na tagpo sa buhay ni Macky, sa gulang niyang kinse anyos ay handa siyang makipaglaro sa init ng apoy. Hindi niya alintana ang kamalian sa mga desisyon niyang ginagawa, at marahil sa dugo niya dumadaloy ang makasalanan niyang lahi. - ‼️Rated Spg | R-18 | Minors is not allowed!‼️ Read at your own risk.

ASHPRA: THE MAFIA QUEEN'S REINCARNATION (On-going) by Luna_Aster

Athena Hymmors is a popular actress, singer, model, and a multi-billionaire CEO. Admired for her goddess-like beauty and intelligence, she captivates the world. However, little do people know that she harbors a dark secret-the existence of her demonic persona, Luna. On her 18th birthday, a series of betrayals unfold, leading to her untimely demise. But her story did not end there. Instead, an unexpected journey began-Athena was reborn as Astraea Sol Hemera Psyche Riecka Alosia, the forbidden princess of Ashpra. 🏅Most Impressive Ranking🏅 #fantasy no. 3 out of 35.2k stories #royalty no. 3 out of 1.4k stories (January 2025) #reincarnation no 102 out of 2,36k stories #magic no. 106 out of 10,05k stories #tragedy no. 63 out of 7,14k stories. #eunwoo no. 1 out of 333 stories _________________________ ♡Luna

CAPTIVATED BY VASH CALVINDER by blue_in_night

Caroline Vixelle De Carlo, a 23-year-old woman, finds herself heartbroken after being dumped by her first boyfriend. Seeking solace, she drink alcohol, hoping it will numb her pain. However, fate has other plans for her. One fateful night, Caroline encounters a mysterious stranger named Adonis Vash Calvinder. Despite their initial unfamiliarity, there is an undeniable connection between them. In a whirlwind turn of events, they share an intimate moment. The next morning, Caroline wakes up to a shocking realization - she is no longer a virgin. Her memories of the encounter are hazy, with only fragments of the man's appearance imprinted in her mind - his arm adorned with tattoos and his hair a striking ash gray. Determined to uncover the identity of the man who took her virginity, Caroline embarks on a quest to find him. As Caroline grapples with her newfound pregnancy, she vows to hold the mysterious man accountable for his actions. Unbeknownst to her, the man has been silently observing her from afar, but he is unable to reveal himself due to undisclosed reasons. _________ Written in FILIPINO-ENGLISH story Revised (2021) All rights reserved october 2019 Written by Joanna Marie

Shush Series (Book 1) by lewdnotion_

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The Doctor Series #1 : My New Life is You by ArishaBlissa

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First And Forever by TheKnightQueen

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Escaping from My Sister in Law's Obsession

Si Elara Meridian Galen ay 17 years old na isang law student sa Harbinger University. Galing sa mayaman na pamilya ngunit hindi pa rin siya masaya dahil pakiramdam niya ay wala siyang kalayaan. Si Ethan Orion Galen ay ang panganay na kapatid ni Elara na 26 years old. Isa itong abogado at namamahala ng kanilang family business. Si Lysandra Aether Harbinger naman ay isang abogado at politician sa edad na 28 years old. Isa siyang Governor at ang soon to be fiancé ni Ethan. Anong mangyayari kung ang sister-in-law ni Elara ay obsessed sa kanya habang engaged sa kanyang kuya?!? TAGLISH