Bitter Sweet
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Last published Fri, Jul 25, 2014
An orphaned girl who is forced at a very young age to be a mercenary (hit man/girl), has to endure unfortunate circumstances ripping apart her life. She is determined to not let what happened to her happen to others and is dead set on protecting people. She pain-stakingly works to save lives and solve murders by a serial killer. Trust is the one thing she never gives out recklessly. Terrifyingly realistic occurrences that involve broken bones and ALOT of twists you won't even expect.
~A/N: I just want to say that this story is completely fictional and is not based on anyone. All the names that are in this story are made up directly by me. If it reminds you of a similar occurance in one of her situations, I apologize. But I doubt that would happen.
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