Friend or Foe?

Friend or Foe?

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Hey everyone! I'm excited to show you the first part of my new story "Friend or Foe?"! It's about an AU I thought of, where Alice (Toon Alice) was made in those cases we see the Lost Ones being made inside in Chapter 5 in the big Ink Machine. So this is her first time meeting Bendy, and she doesn't really know what to think. I hope my writing has improved. I don't really know how semicolons work, I read some examples but I'm still not sure I did it right. If anyone could tell me what sentences does and does not need one, please let me know. Also let me know if there's any spelling mistakes. IDK if I'll ever be motivated to finish my other stories, since I'm a bit motivated to write this one right now. Sorry.. If you like this story, leave a comment and tell me what'cha think. Always appreciate feedback and how I can improve! Please don't repost this to other sites, and don't claim you wrote this!
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Hi there! I'm new to writing and this is the first ever story I've written. I know there are going to be a lot of mistakes since English is neither my mother tongue nor my first language. So I would appreciate it if readers give me constructive criticism rather than hating me for a few mistakes. I thank you in advance for reading my story. Now let's dive into the story. Shall we?

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