This is one of my first stories so I want all possible feedback. This idea came from my artist who is making the comic version of this story. Here is some context for the story The cities skyline is a forbidding color of neon blue and purple. The large skyscrapers seem to look like hands, endlessly reaching for the heavens above blocking out the bright moon above.. Casting a dark shadow given way to more neon lights. On the outskirts of the city is a dusted sign that read " Welcome to Crows town, Home of the elements and Animorphs. All are welcomed."All Rights Reserved