Am I Your Friend?
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She didn't blink. Not when he made faces, or laughed. Not when he questioned her what was wrong. Not when he put his hand on her shoulder.
Sophia met the mystery Victor online one night a few weeks after her boyfriend dumped her. Drowning in her own tears, crying out for help. Victor was there. Victor made her happy. Victor told her what she needed to hear... but was Victor the man who she thought he'd been all along.
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