Am I Your Friend?

Am I Your Friend?

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*short story/chapters She didn't blink. Not when he made faces, or laughed. Not when he questioned her what was wrong. Not when he put his hand on her shoulder. Sophia met the mystery Victor online one night a few weeks after her boyfriend dumped her. Drowning in her own tears, crying out for help. Victor was there. Victor made her happy. Victor told her what she needed to hear... but was Victor the man who she thought he'd been all along. Leave me tips down below how I can improve my writing and make this story more enjoyable.Thank you! ~ paige x
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[COMPLETED] #1 on the Hot list in category Short Story. "I have a problem. The name Eva Hawkins has been running through my mind several times the past four weeks. That's what usually happens when a boy starts developing feelings for a girl. I wouldn't know as I always claim, I've never fallen in love before. Perhaps attirance and looks in general made me feel as if I didn't need to love. I could get anyone as simple as it sounds. No feelings attached or reluctance. One-time things. But I was falling hard and swift. It does go crazy when boys develop feelings. Thing is I'm that boy, and Eva Hawkins doesn't know I exist." ________ Copyrights © 8planets 2021 ⚑Highest Rankings (Short story - mm/dd/yyy): #83 (08/24/16) #60 (08/28/16) #54 (09/01/16) #7 (02/26/19) #1 (02/28/19) & (08/12/19) ⚑Started: July 19th 2016 ⚑Ended: February 2nd 2019 ⚑Marked as mature for strong language + violence + suicidal content.

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