Captive
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''I felt the panic surge through me as the realization dawned on me that I was in a moving vehicle, not only was I attacked, I was being kidnapped.''
''I tried to lift my upper body, but it was as if my body was asleep; I could only lift my head, which caused the pain lodged in my temple to worsen. My head dropped back, the exhaustion taking its course, I felt my eyes starting to shut, but before they did I caught sight of the man in the driver's seat, then I drifted off into the darkness once more.''
Lena is a 17 year old girl suffering from depression after the death of her father. She is a good girl always following the rules, very reserved, and never getting in trouble. But one day that all changes when Lena decides to take a trip with her best friend, leading to a perilous event, from which she finds she must survive.
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