Please Don't Go
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Tatum Janelle Eaton is finally eighteen years old. Which means it's time for her choosing ceremony. Will she finally escape the abusive reign of her father and will a certain leader be able to break down those walls she's built up to protect herself.
Eric coulter dauntless leader. He's ruthless and feared by all. He's been know to hang initiates over the chasm without hesitating, but what happens when a blue eyed blonde haired girl jumps off the train after the choosing ceremony.
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