Indescribable

Broken and pierced from the loves I gave,
Torn and teared from the hopes you left,
Drunk and die from the sacrifice we've done,

But sometimes,
Words and songs you sang,
Makes me feel a little bit more alive

ps: I'll have tons and tons of grammatical error so you can just point out which part that I am wrong and I'll gladly study them more. Oh and one more, I am weird and so do my poem. You can read them at your own cost of brokenhearted , okay?