Books and Reviews [OPEN]

#1 in Reviews. (23 Aug, 2019)
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'Here, this is the book I have written. Please give it a read and tell me if it needs any improvement.' John hands his book to his best friend, Nate.

'Sure, mate,' Nate takes the book. 'I would love to read your book.'

One month later, Nate returns John his book back. 'How was it?' John asks eagerly.

Nate looks at John, analyses and says, 'It was cool.'

'Really?'

'Yeah. I mean, it could use some improvement but it was cool.'

John struggles to refrain his smile stretching out of his face as he places he dumps his book in his drawer, satisfied, and never looks at it for years. Until one day, after writing the epilogue of his seventh book, John takes his first book out, expecting his book to be "cool". But as he reads his three pages, he dies out of disgust.

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No, I won't let you die of disgust and by the sheer act of cringing. I'll tell you your mistakes, the illogicality behind your plot and the actions of your characters, the fault in your worlds, the inconsistent pace of your story, your grammatical errors, and basically all the dreadful things that would basically give you a heart attack. (Remind me to turn my Mature Content label on.)

But don't worry, beside these things, I will give you suggestions and tips. And if your story is too good for this world and is cleansed out of all these things, then, it will be titled as The Book of the Month.

So what are you waiting for? Hop on the Review Bus that will give you a long tour of your story through the a reader's perspective.