Imagine

This is my first official story that I am creating and I hope to gain feedback or thoughts from anyone reading. I would like any tips or ideas to help improve my writing as to become a better author. Please enjoy and support this first attempt to create a story, thank you. I might make more stories like this in the future so without further ado, I give you my first attempt, Imagine.

(Some thanks to x_dashy_x for some ideas for the story)