Perfection
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  • Reads 8,599
  • Votes 225
  • Parts 54
  • Time 3h 51m
Ongoing, First published Jul 16, 2014
Mature
How can someone choose who you fall in love with besides your heart and God? Well when you have 3 over protective brothers they will try to make anything they say go.

Ce'Nae Ortega who just turned 16. She Only can date the boy of her brothers chose so.. Secrets are kept. Ever heard of some shit like that ?

But what happens when they go back to their childhood state? Where they were raised. Secrets, lies, hurt, drama, death, death, death.

Will her perfect life be oh so perfect after one of her enemies find out or will it just come out...
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The First

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I was the first. I arrived in the Glade, and there was nothing and... no one. I remembered nothing about who I was, who my parents were, what happened. A few days I remembered my name, and that's it. That's all that ever came back. There were four walls surrounding me with only one exit. I wanted to go through, so I did, in hopes of finding my way out. What I found lurking on the other side was not an exit but something much worse. I found my way back, and I spent the next month fending for myself. Food, water, a temporary shelter. After a month, someone else arrived, and this person arrived with supplies. Every month a new person was sent up. Every arrival was the same as mine. They couldn't remember anything. I was the first one here, and that means that I call the shots, I make the rules, and I run the place.