Mergana - one shot

This was actually a piece I wrote for a story I was writing with a friend. It's one of my preferred ways of writing, never knowing what's coming next. It gets long and complicated as two different ideas battle to be heard but it keeps you on your toes and gets you thinking...

Although reading it a year on, it now looks like a mergana oneshot :3

I'll try and find the right story if you'd like - so feed back duly wanted :D