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Let Me Go #JaaneDeMujhe
ritikajyala
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ritikajyala
Complete, First published Jul 26, 2019
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"You left me but
did not let me go.
Millenia I spent, 
millenia in woe. "


Heartbreak, love, pain... 

From Adam and Eve to Salim and Anarkali to a modern day love story, this poem dives into the world's greatest tragedies to express these humane feelings. 

This poem is for the #JaaneDeMujhe writing contest.


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