Decaying City

A short story, about a child who decided to explore the surface and stumbled upon on a strange world, that was falling apart.

I wrote this story in my junior year creative writing class. I read to people more than once and I have updated over time.

This is my first time publishing a story and I want some feedback, so I can improve in my writing. So don't be afraid of being honest.

Artwork credit goes to James O'Brien (Vadim Ignatiev) on artstation.