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𝟖𝐓𝐇 𝐃𝐎𝐆 || JJK x Makima!reader
"𝘖𝘯𝘭𝘺 𝘢𝘯𝘴𝘸𝘦𝘳 𝘸𝘪𝘵𝘩 "𝘠𝘦𝘴" 𝘰𝘳 "𝘞𝘰𝘰𝘧", 𝘐 𝘥𝘰𝘯'𝘵 𝘯𝘦𝘦𝘥 𝘢 𝘥𝘰𝘨 𝘸𝘩𝘰 𝘴𝘢𝘺𝘴 "𝘕𝘰"." 𝙅𝙪𝙟𝙪𝙩𝙨𝙪 𝙆𝙖𝙞𝙨𝙚𝙣 𝙭 𝙈𝙖𝙠𝙞𝙢𝙖 ! 𝙍𝙚𝙖𝙙𝙚𝙧 ➥ In which a 𝐦𝐲𝐬𝐭𝐞𝐫𝐢𝐨𝐮𝐬 𝐠𝐢𝐫𝐥 named y/n works as one of the 1st-year teachers, alongside the famous 𝐆𝐨𝐣𝐨 𝐒𝐚𝐭𝐨𝐫𝐮. 𝘀𝘁𝗮𝘁𝘂𝘀 : completed/not edited 𝘀𝘁𝗮𝗿𝘁𝗲𝗱 : 04/28/2024 𝐞𝐧𝐝𝐞𝐝: 11/06/2024 ─── ⋆⋅ ♰ ⋅⋆ ─── NOTE: Please be aware that this book may contain some triggering and uncomfortable themes.Complete![[ on editing hiatus ] 𝐖𝐎𝐔𝐋𝐃 𝐘𝐎𝐔 𝐆𝐈𝐕𝐄 𝐌𝐄 𝐀 𝐅𝐋𝐎𝐖𝐄𝐑? | ᶜˢᵐ](https://img.wattpad.com/cover/362103376-256-k654628.jpg)
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━ 002. ❝For someone so focused on finding some strange sort of fairy tale love, you spend a lot of time worrying about other people's problems... And for what? ❞ [CURRENTLY ON SEVERE EDITING HIATUS!!!] In which, a tired but relentlessly perfectionistic girl gets entangled in the affairs of Aki and his squad of weirdos. Now here she is with the strange group and surprisingly she can't wait to kick ass and eat grass. She's not sure how her life went this direction or how one day she contracted an infection from an alien organism. Hey, at least she's amused by it, even though she's pretty sure she got the disease from Makima. On the bright side of all of this chaos, maybe she'll find love. And she can do a whole lot when she buys her own nine millimeter. "So... Are you a boobs or ass type of guy?" "Well... I'd have to go with boobs all the way!" "Really? I haven't heard that from anyone but my brother, you would have definitely gotten along with him." "This is an inappropriate conversation to have at work!"
꒰ ˖ ࣪⊹💤𓂅 𝙙𝙧𝙚𝙖𝙢𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙤𝙛 𝙮𝙤𝙪... ミ🌱₊˚⟡ 💭 ꒱ (resident evil 4)
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The Standouts - A Critique Contest by PAULAPDX (Summer 2019 Edition)
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↳bnha x denji!reader ❝all i gotta do is rev up and i'm ready to turn anything in my way to sawdust!❞ kicking villain ass is awesome, but I'm really in this hero gig for the chance at a normal life- and boobs, dick too. . bi/pansexual implied reader, masculine! afab! reader . slight romance with various characters, though the story is focused on character development a/n: i fucking love reading and responding to your comments, so make more neoww!!
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