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Narumitsu
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Bersambung, Awal publikasi Jul 28, 2019
Hello, everyone.
This is my first fanfiction. It's very cringe-worthy. But you can give me feedback so I can improve the storyline a bit because I'm not a creative person at all.
Please comment on every chapter.
It makes me very, very happy and all.
And there may be minor spelling errors
if you see one, please tell me as soon as possible. 

-- About the story-
Phoenix, Miles, and Larry were in a bar.
Larry suggested playing truth or dare
Phoenix agreed, but Miles was thinking about it. But eventually, Miles agreed on playing truth or dare for once with Larry and Phoenix. Larry dared Phoenix to drink more whiskey even though that Phoenix is a bit drunk.
But Phoenix made a bold move to take the challenge that Larry offered...








This story contains mature content.
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