Battered and Bruised

She's tired of being battered and bruised, poor, ugly, unloved, and unnoticed.
She only wants to live peacefully.
She didn't want anything in her life. Until she met one person. And this person made her want everything in this world.

Note: English is not my first language, so I apologies for my grammar mistakes. If you want to correct me, you can leave it down at the comment.
Also, this is my first time writing a book. I need your opinion about my book, so I can improve my writing skills.