Der Untergang der Ca'lunin
Phoenixglut
  • Reads 189
  • Votes 4
  • Parts 1
  • Time 18m
  • Reads 189
  • Votes 4
  • Parts 1
  • Time 18m
Phoenixglut
Complete, First published Jul 29, 2019
darkfantasyfantasyhighfantasykurzgeschichtespannungtestlauf
Dieser Text ist ein Spin-Off meines ersten Romans. 

Er ist als kleiner Vorgeschmack auf die geschaffene Welt und deren Konflikte zu verstehen. 

Ich möchte herausfinden, ob meine Art zu schreiben ansprechend ist, was verbessert werden kann.

Schon jetzt danke ich euch für alle Kommentare  :)
Ich denke, mit jeder Überarbeitung, die auf konstruktiver Kritik basiert,  wird ein Text besser.
Dann mal los: Ab ins Haifischbecken mit meiner ersten Kurzgeschichte.
All Rights Reserved
darkfantasyfantasyhighfantasykurzgeschichtespannungtestlauf
Table of contents

1 part

Sign up to add Der Untergang der Ca'lunin to your library and receive updates
or
#49spannung
Content Guidelines
You may also like
Cannon Fodder Cultivation Guide by NoenSnow
171 parts Ongoing
Other Title: Guide to Cultivating as a Cannon Fodder (炮灰修真指南) by Qinglian Yuefu Becoming a cannon fodder supporting a female character who is destined to die within the first three chapters, Zhang Yiyi decisively begins her self-rescue mode. This is the story of a young girl fighting her way out from among countless cannon fodder, ultimately achieving enlightenment and ascending by breaking through the void.
"මගේ හිතුවක්කාරයා" by Faikedarkwolf
14 parts Ongoing
(උබ කියන්නෙම drug එකක් මේ අභීට ඕනවටත් වඩා ඕන වෙන )
Red Panda Raising Cubs and Farming in the World of Beasts by LaroseArie
96 parts Ongoing
Content introduction: Title: 小熊猫在兽世养崽种田 Author: 灰剑如羽 [Complete + Extras] Introduction to the book: Xiong Miao, a top student at the University of Traditional Chinese Medicine, traveled to the world of beasts and became separated from his parents. He was rescued by a big snow leopard. red panda. Holding his big furry reddish-brown tail, looking at the other party's big tail that was bigger and longer than him, Xiong Miao: I want to touch... Xueyuan looked at the sub-female he picked up with two cubs. The orc was carried back to his nest with a whimper. Special topics: Cool articles, A match made in heaven, Farming articles, Sweet pet articles, Love has a soft spot, Gray sword is like a feather. Tips: If you think 52 is good, remember to bookmark the unique website https://www.52shuku.vip/ or recommend it to your friends ~ Please (>.<) ____________________________________________________________________________ T/N: This is not mine. I just saw someone posted the title but I can't find any English translated version. I got curious and wanted to read the story. So I decided to post the translated version here to read it offline . 👀 But, I'm not a Chinese speaker. I only use Google translation to help me translate. I edited some lines according to how I understood the sentences. English is not my first language either. So, I may overlook a lot of grammatical errors. I hope you can support the author if you like the story.🫶 https://www.jjwxc.net/onebook.php?novelid=6321111 https://www.52shuku.vip/jiakong/20_b/bjU9X.html
အချစ်၏နူးညံ့ခြင်း[Ongoing] by pear721
24 parts Ongoing
တေဇာဘုန်းမြတ်💕ခင်ချူးချူးခိုင် တေဇာဘုန်းခန့် 💕သွန်းသံသာ
ကံမကောင်းတဲ့ အမျိုးသားအရံဇာတ်ကောင်ကို လက်ထပ်ဖို့ ၇၀ခုနှစ်သို့ ပြန်သွားခြင်း by LuciousKim
58 parts Ongoing
_beautifulfemalelead _business _fantasy _femaleprotagonist _handsome Malelead _military _pregnancy _space _teachers
A Song of Gelato and Flambé by BksbyBkr
33 parts Complete
In the epic conclusion to the Devil's Deal series, Freya has one final chance to discover the full potential of her own power, and to use it to restore balance in the universe - once and for all. After the destruction caused by Roisin, Ferya and Torix come to terms with their losses and mistakes... And prepare for a final battle that will change everything.
I Hate You by THT-Sweet
72 parts Ongoing
Warning: 18+ ABO worldကို အခြေခံရေးသားထားပါသည်။ စိတ်ကူးယဉ် ficလေးမို့ အပြင်လောကနှင့် များစွာ ကွာခြားနိုင်ပါသည်။
A Painting of the Villainess as a Young Lady by COOLCHARMIN
141 parts Ongoing
A villainess known by all as a wicked woman who has done all sorts of evil deeds-Ducal Lady Violet. She regained her memories of her previous life after she fell into a lake and almost died. The very moment she woke up, she immediately visited her father, Duke Everett, and asked one thing. "Please confine me to the annex."And so, she imprisoned herself there. Now that Violet was secluded away from the world's criticism and reproach, She immersed herself in her previous life's memories and started painting them. "What the hell are you up to this time?". Everyone was suspicious of just what she might be scheming. However, the misunderstandings surrounding her gradually got resolved one at a time. This story is not mine. Credits to the rightful owner & sources.
Quick Transmigration: The Extremely Beautiful Cannon Fodder by katz_01
112 parts Ongoing
Quick Transmigration: The Extremely Beautiful Cannon Fodder Doesn't Want to Be Hurt He was born to be a celestial being, adored by all. Yet, through the interference of external forces, he became the tragic cannon fodder of each world. Until one day... He was the insignificant nobody in a dating reality show, dragged in by the director to participate in a live-streamed romance after the original celebrity guest bailed. The internet relentlessly criticized him. He was the self-conscious younger brother of the protagonist in a beloved family novel, disliked by his family and ostracized by his brother. Accused of various misdeeds, he met a tragic end. He was a freelance artist, falsely accused by his neighbor of summoning a ghost. The neighbor, terrified of being trapped in an infinite loop world, blamed him and pushed him into the unknown. ...One day, the world's consciousness began to awaken. Its once-dimmed form, drained by the energy stolen by the protagonist, now emanated a true brilliance. He was meant to shine, but instead, his energy was stolen, leaving him in this tragic state. The world, with its stolen energy, began to crumble. The deity must save the people, and the long-awaited faithful will finally welcome their god. Credits to the Author : 梅子花開
The Pen by blackxlovee
11 parts Ongoing
wildest imagination
You may also like
Slide 1 of 10
Cannon Fodder Cultivation Guide cover
"මගේ හිතුවක්කාරයා" cover
Red Panda Raising Cubs and Farming in the World of Beasts cover
အချစ်၏နူးညံ့ခြ�င်း[Ongoing] cover
ကံမကောင်းတဲ့ အမျိုးသားအရံဇာတ်ကောင်ကို လက်ထပ်ဖို့ ၇၀ခုနှစ်သို့ ပြန်သွားခြင်း cover
A Song of Gelato and Flambé cover
I Hate You cover
A Painting of the Villainess as a Young Lady cover
Quick Transmigration: The Extremely Beautiful Cannon Fodder cover
The Pen cover

Cannon Fodder Cultivation Guide

171 parts Ongoing

Other Title: Guide to Cultivating as a Cannon Fodder (炮灰修真指南) by Qinglian Yuefu Becoming a cannon fodder supporting a female character who is destined to die within the first three chapters, Zhang Yiyi decisively begins her self-rescue mode. This is the story of a young girl fighting her way out from among countless cannon fodder, ultimately achieving enlightenment and ascending by breaking through the void.

More details