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As Thoughts Come
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Ongoing, First published Jul 31, 2019
A collection of proses and poems I may or may have not mostly written at 12 am, or with 3 hours of sleep.

Most of the things I'll post are incredibly experimental, since I'm really focusing on how to develop my style, so things may be all over the place. All of my posts, however, had a very clear intention and purpose in mind.

I am very open to constructive criticism, and I actually encourage it, since I don't really have beta readers. I guess I also just want to know if what I write makes sense or if it's enjoyable and pleasant to go through (a lot of the things I'll publish, like the first 14 chapter, will be somewhat old though; you can still tell me what NOT to do based on what you read from old stuff though)

Since I work on this sort of thing whenever inspiration strikes me, "a messy schedule" will most probably turn out to be kind of an understatement. Unfortunately. Or not.
Expect random edits and removed chapters, I'm not usually satisfied by my work.

And obviously, thanks for reading!
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For years, I've been writing in silence, creating worlds, characters, and stories that lived only in the margins of my notebooks and tucked-away folders on my computer. Writing has always been my escape, something I've done for myself-a way to step out of reality for a moment and breathe through the lives of the people I've imagined. I've written and rewritten countless stories, always hesitant to share them, never quite confident enough to let anyone else peek into the depths of my mind. It's always felt like just a hobby, something personal, something safe. But deep down, I've carried a quiet dream of becoming a writer, even though it felt a little foolish to hope for something so big. Now, after pouring myself into this story for what feels like a lifetime, I've finally done it-I've uploaded all my chapters to Wattpad, sharing this piece of me with the world. I know I still have so much to learn, and I'm always striving to get better, but I would truly appreciate any feedback-good, constructive criticism that can help me grow. This is just the beginning, but it feels like a huge step forward. Thank you for taking a chance on this book. Whatever brought you here, whether it was curiosity, a recommendation, or just a moment of wandering, I am truly grateful.