Our Final Sunsets
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Last published Fri, Aug 16, 2019
Originally I write novels and am currently working on one right now after years of inactivity. It's still a long way from being finished and I don't want to publish it right away. So for now, I hope you enjoy these set of poems that I will use to awaken my creative juices after a hiatus.
I present to you, "Our Final Sunsets". Some of these poems were the ones I made and gave to my special someone...but ALL of them were inspired by my past flame... and to her...thank you for everything.
In these poems, I will share what kind of a girl she was, and what kind of a relationship we had. And hopefully, find my own answers too.
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