One Year Ago
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Last published Thu, Aug 29, 2019
"But I didn't know. No one did now. And it was all my fault. And now she was gone. And I would never get to know her. And one thought radiated through my mind. What if it was me?"
Faith Shaloh was the only one who knew who killed her best friend that night. But the problem was, she couldn't remember who.
On her way to the police station, Faith crashed her car, and went into a coma. For a year.
When Faith overheard a conversation from her parents about that friend, Faith was determined to find her killer.
What Faith didn't know was that she was supposed to die that night too.
Faith began to remember things that happened with Becca, and heard a voice inside her head.
But the killer was still out there.
With the help of friend, she buys herself some time.
But time means nothing when someone else has more of it.
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