The unexpected surprise (Unedited)
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Born in a typical rural area, kamal had no idea how life in the city looks like. It was his dream to travel out of his village to a big city. At age of 16, his dream came true when he won a scholarship to study in one of the most expensive boarding secondary schools in Nigeria.
Upon arriving at his new school, he became completely disheartened because people in the city aren't exactly what he was expecting. They all looked down on him and mock him because he was the only person in the school from a poor family. Along the way, he met Sarah and Peter, who became his only friends at school.
Meanwhile, Fatima is the most beautiful girl at school who also happened to be the overall best student. Many boys had tried to win her heart, but none was up to her liking. Things began to get interesting when Kamal fell irresistibly in love with her. Does he stand a chance of winning her heart despite his poor background? Find out by reading more on THE UNEXPECTED SURPRISE
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