I wrote this back in 2016, and it I read it again today. I thought it was still relevant to what we have to live through each day. Mostly I'm just posting this to gain some feedback and suggestions on my writing, so feel free to suggest any changes.
Únete a la comunidad narrativa más grandeObtén recomendaciones personalizadas de historias, guarda tus favoritas en tu biblioteca, y comenta y vota para hacer crecer tu comunidad.
I decided to rewrite this story, and I might rewrite a few others.
Feedback will be appreciated, I will post every Saturday after today (If I forget, don't blame me.).