Exercice de réécriture
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Voilà, 8 ans après, j'ai retrouvé un vieux chapitre d'une de mes fanfictions Twilight. Un soir alors que je m'ennuyais, j'ai décidé qu'il serait amusant que j'essaie de le réécrire mais avec mon niveau d'aujourd'hui ! Ce n'est pas totalement à mon goût, mais l'exercice a été plus difficile que prévu !
A l'époque, je la postais sur skyrock, alors, comme on disait à ce moment là : 5 coms pour le chapitre 2 !
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