Willow's wisp
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A/N: This is a draft for a book I'm writing. I'm posting it here looking for some input so constructive criticism is very, very welcome!!!
Severely socially challenged Enoch Harlow has been living in orphanages for as long as he can remember. Then seemingly out of nowhere an eccentric Australian psychologist adopts him and has him come live with him at willow's lake estate deep in the English countryside. The house is old, and uncannily cold.
Plagued with strange dreams and teased by his "Brothers" for his sensitive personality things aren't easy for Enoch. But things really weird when he meets Mercy, an oddball with a nasty habit of being thrown into solitary confinement.
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