Chocolate Rose
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MatureOngoing9m
Last published Sun, Aug 18, 2019
This is my very first book please give me a chance I love creative criticism. But ciao hunnybun ❤️
Rain beat against my back but the only thing I feel is nothing, no happiness, no pain, just emptiness. A car screeched to a stop beside me a door slam echoed far away from my ears as I continue to walk
"Jezebel, Jezebel." My name being called didn't even stop my emotionless facade, footsteps gradually increasing slapping against the wet pavement. "Jezebel please stop," hands grab my arm twisting me from my walk to nowhere. Staring up into the grey abyss of a gorgeous man a man who doesn't seem to care about anything but himself a man who was supposed to be my everything but I don't know anymore!!??!!
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