A Guide to an Effective Warriors Story
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Last published Tue, Aug 27, 2019
The Warriors Series by Erin Hunter was a big part of my childhood. I used to love reading fanworks by them but had such a hard time finding ones that were concise and well thought out. Every good idea is a seed and I want to help you grow that story! Join me as I detail how to make an effective story and help you to knew heights! I do critique stories so leave your stories in the comments if you want a good critique! (Nothing mature.)
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