Allegiant epilogue
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So, I know everyone hates the ending of Allegiant. I can't change that but I can add more. Here's a little epilogue to allegiant. WARNING: DO NOT READ IF YOU HAVE NOT READ THE ENTIRE DIVERGENT SERIES.
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