Only Average (EDITING)

Only Average (EDITING)

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Hey guys, I have already "finished" the book, but am now going through it and making it better. More story line, more in depth and more characters! So if you start reading it now, it may not make sense since I'm doing chapter by chapter. But I do hope that you come by when it's completely finished and tell me what you think :) This story will be in the point of view of all of the characters at one point. I feel like it would be better to understand everyone feelings and thoughts on certain parts in the book. Only Average is the name of a very popular band in LA. Luke- The main guitarist/ singer, Jake- The drummer, Mike- The bass player and Ryan- The second bass player. Everyone thinks of them as druggies, party animals, and players. Well that's mostly true. But no one outside of their band has ever gotten close to see who they truly are. Everyone only knows their reputation. But will anyone ever find out the truth about who they really are? Find out by reading this story in hopes to see what its truly like to be famous in LA and see if they ever do find someone to open up to in the end and show there true character.
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