The cause of my affliction
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This story follows a kidnapped girl's life in the custody of her kidnapper as she slowly mistakes his brutality for affection
“Afflictions are but the shadow of His wings.”
― George MacDonald, The Curate of Glaston
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AUTHOR'S NOTE:
I do realize that this one shot is a bit random and jumbled up. This plot line suddenly took shape in my head and I started typing it out, not really paying attention to proper sequencing or character development. Anyways, I know I left a few loose ends in the story, But I felt it better to leave it up to your imaginations. I also had decided upon an alternative ending but it seemed to random and silly to me, so i decided to change it.
Thank you for reading!:)
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