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Rankings updated with each review. I've done 20 reviews so far.
This is where I go over the first chapter of your book and dissect it to the best of my ability. Am I going to be cruel? Probably. But never on purpose. 
Rankings:
1.The Prophet Who Lives In Seventrees
2.Sorcerer's Spring: a Tale of Exia
3. When Lightening Strikes, Thunder Follows
4. Ultimum Genus: The Last of Her Kind


And I've been ranked 50th in the review tag so that's pretty niceAll Rights Reserved

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Tempest by LucyMangoXX

Sometimes, you believe you are the only one left. Sometimes, you feel that the choices you make move you further away from where you should be. Sometimes, there are forces out there that wrong you and you need to find a way to make things right. Sometimes, you need to face your darkest fears and go down a path that will lead you to a place you had never imagined you would get to. Tempest had the odds stacked against her when her family was torn apart by unknown assailants. For years she thought her family had been killed but when she discovered the truth she realised that there was so much more to their disappearance than she had ever imagined. A war was coming and she had no choice but to fight against forces that she had never thought she would ever meet. But with new friends and alliances, maybe there is hope that they will have a fighting chance. The Supernatural world was heading for a major face off and she would be caught in the middle of it. The only question was, what lengths would she go through to make sure she got her family back and get rid of a threat that could end the world as she knew it. Highest Ranking: #9 in Were #1 in WereTiger #7 in Druids #80 in Lycan #84 in StrongFemaleCharacter #42 in MythicalCreatures

Secrets | j.s. | (COMPLETED) by irrelevantjellybean

|Ranked #269 in Jacob Sartorius 🏆| I don't know what to put here. You should read this story tho :) - - **disclaimer: I wrote this in like 7th grade and fixed a few things last year. You may be the judge of the story.**

REPUTATION • [j.p.] ✔️ by youremynewbestfriend

"in the end we are our choices. build yourself a great story." -jeff bezos rankings: {#36 in Harry Potter-07/24/18} {#4 in Hogwarts-07/07/18} {#8 in Sirius Black-07/31/18} {#4 in Wizarding World-06/29/19} {#1 in James Potter-07/10/19} status: completed [1/23/18-7/19/18]

The Night Sky is in Her Veins by oralie98

// s o n d e r \\ - "the realisation that each random passerby is living a life as vivid and complex as your own" Life can be dark, cold and lonely. Feeling betrayed, misunderstood, chewed up and spat out by the world, its when I get sonder, that I realise I might not be as alone as I thought. This is my autobiography, in a series of harsh and delicate words, painted as a story. Includes drugs, sex, alcoholism, depression, anxiety, self harm, suicidal tendencies, assault and other hard topics, so read at your own discretion. THIS IS THE TRIGGER WARNING. I wrote it, with the intention that, if there are people in the world who feel alone and misunderstood just like me, and can benefit in any way by relating to my stories in my poems, then I have done at least one thing right. Highest rankings: #1 in poetry 07/05/2021 #1 in poetry 26/11/2021 #1 in slampoetry 07/05/2021 #1 in sonder 08/05/2021 #1 in sonder 06/12/2021 #2 in slampoetry 25/11/2021 #2 in slampoetry 01/12/2021 #2 in slampoetry 06/12/2021 #2 in sonder 27/11/2021 #2 in sonder 01/12/2021 #3 in slampoetry 06/07/2021 #3 in sonder 30/09/2021 #3 in sonder 25/11/2021 #3 in sonder 11/12/2021 #4 in slampoetry 24/11/2021 #4 in slampoetry 03/01/2022 #5 in melancholy #6 in sadness #11 in poetry #11 in alcoholism #21 in smoking

A Lonely Hell Tree (Old Version) *2.0 title will be "Crosswalk to Panic" by glutton-sticks

DISCLAIMER: THESE IMAGES ARE NOT OWENED BY ME. THEY ARE FROM THE INTERNET. Story and characters are all mine. DO NOT REPOST MY BOOK. Some strong language is used. PREVIEW Dread, Grief, Love. Is that what she feels? Is she just growing madder on her own? Is Talboris a figment of their imagination? Or is it just you, Akari. You've been thrown into Hell, the Hell that disguises as a safe haven, the Hell that will consume you from the inside out. A lonely tree growing from one seed. You. Your anger. Its roots taint you. Yet all this time, it feels like you've been on a cushioned bed, on the wrong side, dreaming nightmares, monsters grabbing at your ankles. Will you be pulled away? I'm open to criticism if you guys have ideas on what I should add or how to make my writing better! I may end up deleting this book. Tell me if I should continue it. I will make edits whenever I get more ideas. Enjoy the read, I hope you like it! ^^ Please share if you do. Started: September 24, 2021

A Hand Weaving Chaos (Book 2 of The Fallen Gods Trilogy) by jan_claremont

***{WATTYS 2022 SHORTLISTED}*** Jill Logan is plucked from everything she's come to care about, only this time, she's fallen into the hands of Prince Brexten's most powerful enemies, and they are determined to destroy her. There is treachery and manipulation on all sides and Jill has no idea who to trust. The only things she can rely on are her growing magical abilities and the will of the gods if she has any hope of surviving the tide of evil. But the gods are fickle and asking for their help isn't always a good idea. Soon Jill is swept up in a growing revolution as the people revolt against the sorcerers occupying their land. And as Jill's magical skills grow, some want to use her as a tool while others see her as a heretic. Suddenly the girl who believed in nothing-not even herself-will need to take a stand. And as her feelings are pulled between Prince Brexten and Aden, the First Lord Shey'na'shen, the land's most powerful magic wielder, will Jill be able to make the right choice to save both the land and her own heart? Sequel to IN THE SHADOW OF THE GODDESS

Agateophobia by dracollavenore

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Grey I - Intentions by TierneyDanae

Hate, knowledge, loyalty, and love - everything has a price, but the highest is power. What would you pay? » ✦ « Jordan wished there was more to life, more to her world, something to make her feel alive, to feel anything at all. Then one dull day she meets a strange trio. Repeatedly. Her world widens and she learns that everything she ever wanted to be true - is. But fairytales aren't what we think, and legends rarely end well for the legendary. In a story where there are no heroes, good blends with evil, and the lines between light and dark fade to gray - what do you choose? » ✦ « Highest Rankings: #2 in Demonology #2 in Angel Romance #16 in Action #Mature, 18+ for all the reasons. Not a YA novel.

Fire Red | A Pandora's Reckoning Short Story by _elixxir

DISCLAIMER: THIS BOOK CONTAINS SPOILERS FOR BOOK TWO OF THE PANDORA SERIES. ADDITIONALLY, SOME EXPLAINATIONS ARE NONCANON. CONTAINS VIOLENCE AND DEPICTIONS OF CHARACTER DEATH, AS WELL AS SWEARING READ AT YOUR OWN RISK. ----------------- Kairos had always loved Emelithil; the way she chose her words like a spider weaving its web, the way she'd always been so stubborn and competitive-- but never enough to come off us ignorant or naive. Even though they had always fought for something different, he never could have imagined just how far they would drift apart. There was no way he could ever be prepared for what he was about to do to her though. What he did was unthinkable, impossible even. He spent every day by her side after he saved her life, tending to her injuries during her coma, while dealing with the guilt of it all being his, and only his fault. Desperately, he tries to find forgiveness and reconnect with his best friend and crush, but her betrayal burns Fire Red. ----------------- Written for CRW Introduction to Short Story Writing at Flagler College in September 2022, Final revision in December 2022 ----------------- Status: Completed © _elixxir

Y/N Riddle's Slytherin Prince by 7_Slytherin_princess

Y/N Riddle goes to Hogwarts but she doesn't know anyone there. She makes friends with a child she grew up learning not to trust. They are best friends but then their feelings get a little complicated. ___ Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters they belong to JK Rowling. And I don't own you of course. ___ Highest ranking: 1 in fantasyfiction (20th October 2021) 1 in yourstory (28th February 2022) 1 in morethanfriends (4th August 2022) 1 in morethenfriends (4th August 2022)

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Tempest

Sometimes, you believe you are the only one left. Sometimes, you feel that the choices you make move you further away from where you should be. Sometimes, there are forces out there that wrong you and you need to find a way to make things right. Sometimes, you need to face your darkest fears and go down a path that will lead you to a place you had never imagined you would get to. Tempest had the odds stacked against her when her family was torn apart by unknown assailants. For years she thought her family had been killed but when she discovered the truth she realised that there was so much more to their disappearance than she had ever imagined. A war was coming and she had no choice but to fight against forces that she had never thought she would ever meet. But with new friends and alliances, maybe there is hope that they will have a fighting chance. The Supernatural world was heading for a major face off and she would be caught in the middle of it. The only question was, what lengths would she go through to make sure she got her family back and get rid of a threat that could end the world as she knew it. Highest Ranking: #9 in Were #1 in WereTiger #7 in Druids #80 in Lycan #84 in StrongFemaleCharacter #42 in MythicalCreatures