The Big Surprise
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Complete Thu, Aug 29, 2019<5 mins
This is a very short story. I would give you a description, but then you wouldn't have to read the story. This is a piece that I helped a little 9-year-old girl write as a gift for her Grandma. Basically, she told me a story and I served as her editor so it was less like a run-on sentence and more like a story. Really, it's just a kid's story, but I wanted to put it on here to maybe get some feedback or just so others can enjoy the imagination of this little girl.
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