The Big Surprise
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  • Parts 1
  • Time <5 mins
  • Reads 5
  • Votes 1
  • Parts 1
  • Time <5 mins
Complete, First published Aug 29, 2019
This is a very short story. I would give you a description, but then you wouldn't have to read the story. This is a piece that I helped a little 9-year-old girl write as a gift for her Grandma. Basically, she told me a story and I served as her editor so it was less like a run-on sentence and more like a story. Really, it's just a kid's story, but I wanted to put it on here to maybe get some feedback or just so others can enjoy the imagination of this little girl.
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A Short Story

1 part Complete

This is just a story I had to write for a thing. Personally, I like it, it's relatively short, has Undertale vibes, and talks about the joy children bring to the world even though I hate children! I'm good with them, I just hate them. Also, a few parts aren't entirely descriptive (especially towards the end because thats when I got sick and had to wrap things up quickly) because I was on a time limit.