How, Strange (book 1)
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I wanted to try my hand at writing my own story. I don't own any images unless I explicitly say It's mine. Please give constructive criticism if you read this story. Edit: before I forget, this is more or less a rough draft at the moment.
P.S. I need people to tell me any mistakes in things like grammar, spelling, etc. Also, the title is most likely going to change.
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Basic info:
This story is set in a "mythical world" filled with magical beasts. The story follows the group of protagonists looking to make a living, often screwing themselves over in the long run.
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