The Fear Within
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  • Parts 6
  • Time 56m
Ongoing, First published Sep 04, 2019
We all have our own secret fears. For some it might be a fear of heights or spiders, but for Adrian it was himself.
When Adrian was a young child, his older brother, Alejandro, locked him in a closet. His brother knowing he was very afraid of the dark, hoped to enhance that fear. He hoped that Adrian would look at his brother as the hero as he does with their father. As Adrian sat and cried in the closet, already have attempted to escape, noticed a small door in the back, barely visible through the jackets and umbrellas. He wiggled his fingers through the creases. Behind the door was a separate room Opening the small door he was surprised at what he found. There were ghostly people behind the door. They hadn't noticed the small child, as he crawled his way around them. Suddenly one of the wood boards creaked startling these odd people. They snapped their heads around to see Adrian, the source of the noise. The ghostly figures jumped at Adrian, and everything went black.
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We held our breath as we heard footsteps enter the dark room. My heart raced and I covered my mouth to keep from screaming as tears ran down my cheeks. Caleb sat next to me, with obvious fear in his eyes. I knew that the desk couldn't hide us for much longer and that's what scared me the most. The footsteps came closer and they grew louder by the second. I held my breath once I heard the man's footsteps stop. Caleb and I exchanged looks as we sat frozen under the desk. I looked up, trying to listen to the man's actions. Then a gloved hand grabbed the edge of the desk and the man's bloody mask appeared in front of me. He stared at us and chuckled, "Found you." · · · Seven classmates find themselves in detention from breaking the rules at their school. This, of course, isn't their first time in detention but something seemed different. The teacher leaves to do something leaving the kids completely unsupervised which was kind of weird. He usually left some goody two shoes to watch them but this time there was no one except them. Creepy things begin to happen and they find themselves locked in the school. What was this? Time is ticking as they try to find their way out before they end up lying in a puddle of their own blood.