Becoming Determinant - Tobias' Story
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For a long time, we kiss like that, and I forget that the others are there, forget that there's a war outside the train, forget that we no longer have a home or a position in an uncertain world... Tobias' perspective from before "Divergent" through my "Determinant" alternate 3rd book, with lots of original scenes.
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